//piss, dubcon, pain, somno

hi mousie,
no need to apologise your thoughts are welcome here! i think its fine to leave your thoughts on other's threads. i personally find that a good way to start talking with people on the tl and enjoying sharing ideas back and forth with people. i think the only time when this is problematic is if you state you or someone who isn't the og poster should/will write it without checking with the poster first. lots of people post their thoughts with intentions of maybe writing it themselves one day. if you're just adding onto the thoughts on the og post i think thats a lot of fun, but i can't speak for the entire community ofc. if you're shy/in doubt you could always phrase your addition as a question. i.e: does mnh train bunny jsvng to be a good house pet?... ect.

ok now on to the actual thoughts!
yes! he gets trained to be a very good house pet. probably lots of spankings until jsvng knows the proper way to behave and talk to mnh. once he's shown he can be trusted he even gets to sleep in the big bed with mnh instead of his hutch.
jsvng learning how to get himself into the proper position, arms and legs placed correctly for mnh to loop the rope around them. he still gets so scared and nervous but he really wants to be good to mnh, the breedings are hard and painful and scary, but otherwise mnh is soooo sweet and feeds/takes care of him so well. its much nicer than life on the street so he really wants to make it work.
i think while he's learning how to get into position properly mnh pinches him a lot, and little spanks until jsvng figures it out. but once he gets mnh is always so gentle with him while he gets in position. but he knows he needs to learn because mnh tells him how important breeding sessions for bunny boys are, how they turn so stupid and desperate without them. jsvng begins to fear that sm because he does feel that way sometimes when mnh touches him. once he's better at it though mnh rubs his soft bunny ears and pets his back and flanks. plays with his little bunny tail (and that always makes him a little wet ,,>﹏<,,). mnh coos at him and gives him sm praise. its why jsvng learns to look forward to the breedings at least a little. sometimes mnh's extra silly and tickles him with his tail.
he still has to be tied down though because it does hurt so much, he can't help but twitch. it takes him a long time to get used to the barbs on mnh's cock. even then its not like he gets used to the pain, its just mnh knows how to make the pain feel so good. he comes to associate the scrape with mnh's fingers on his clit and after awhile he doesn't even need that. especially when mnh tells him what a good bunny he is, how useful he is to him. that gets him such a high because thats all he wants! he wants to be the best and most useful bunny for mnh. (i also think mnh likes to play with his asshole sometimes just to make him really squirmy).
he definitely still wets himself sometimes. he has a little bunny heart and this big predator hybrid is growling and snarling behind or above him. seeing mnh's fangs always makes his legs weak, and when he bites jsvng it always hurts and his adrenaline pounds. those are the jaws of a predator. so he pisses himself and mnh tuts. "silly bunny isn't even housetrained yet?" he loves to do things to terrify jsvng, knowing his anime girl legs will buckle in the hallway and he'll make a puddle.
he probably wets the bed a lot in the beginning because mnh likes to play with him while he's asleep and wakes jsvng up with the scrape of his barbs inside him. which hurts so bad and is so scary and disorienting to wake up to he always pisses himself. and mnh maybe rubs his nose in it to teach him a lesson. so eventually jsvng learns to expect that and he wakes up boneless and floppy instead, trying to be small as possible until this big bad tiger is done with him.

thank you for your thoughts, please come back anytime because they were so tasty!!

//blood, kidnapping, dubcon, forced feeding

um hello?? i couldn't respond to this straight away because i went 'head empty' when i read it. i still sort of feel like that now its so tasty. is jsvng mnh's captive here? I also go to panther mnh, but happy to hear other ideas. or maybe some sort of snake or scorpion so he can have venom to help with paralyzing jsvng :3 mnh captures a pretty little bunny boy he sees in the woods one day and drags him back to his den.
and mnh is just trying to help! just trying to feed his pretty bunny. he's so sweet and gentle as he strokes jsvng's face, and jsvng knows he shouldn't but mnh has been so kind to him (besides kidnapping him and holding him captive). jsvng's silly bunny brain has started to trust him and this beautiful man wants kiss him? of course he lets it happen. his eyes flutter shut and he rests his hands on mnh's shoulders. and its so sweet! mnh's lips are so soft, and he's holding him so gently. its the best first kiss he could have imagined.
when mnh's tongue touches his lips, well jsvng is so enamored and mnh is being so sweet with him of course he opens his mouth to deepen the kiss! he's forgotten about his fangs and the way he dragged him through the forest back to his den. his heart is pounding and his chest is warm. his little cock is twitching in excitement. (also mnh should have a freaky tongue depending on what pred. hybrid he is. rough like a cats or forked like a serpent). and thats when suddenly there is the taste of copper in his mouth and mnh is pushing the meat in with his freaky tongue.
he tries to fight mnh, scratching at his arms but mnh is sm stronger it barely effects him. mnh pulls away and covers jsvng's mouth and nose. cooing gently as jsvng gags and tries not to swallow the meat. but ofc he does eventually, its that or pass out. when mnh releases him he's a little dizzy from lack of air and he's gagging, tears down his face. jsvng tries to pull away but he's weakened by lack of air and mnh manages to knock him to the ground and kneel across his chest/arms to keep him from being able to move his hands/arms to stop him.
jsvng cries and begs mnh not to do it. but he just rubs one of jsvng's bunny ears gently.
"sweet boy you need to eat. i'll take care of you."
jsvng's stomach turns and he begins sobbing as mnh drags over the meat he'd hidden before. a hare of some kind, floppy and bloody in mnh's fingers. mnh sinks his fangs into it and rips a chunk of meet free, smiling a bloody smile once he's chewed it for jsvng. jsvng turns his head to avoid mnh's approaching lips but its no problem at all for mnh to grab his jaw and hold it open as he spits some meat into his mouth.
"there, eat up sweet boy." mnh says as he holds jsvng's mouth and nostrils closed again.
the stench and taste of iron-rich blood flooding jsvng's senses. mnh's crimson smile haunts him, viscera clinging to his fangs. mnh keeps on like that, making sure his bunny boy is well fed. the fight leaves jsvng at some point and just cries silently and swallows as mnh pushes the meat into his mouth. he can't help thinking how his first kiss has been ruined.
mnh's hands are free once jsvng stops fighting because he doesn't need to hold his mouth and nose closed. so he runs such sweet gentle touches over jsvng's face and soft bunny ears. leaving little red trails in his wake. he coos at jsvng and tells him what a good boy he is. doesn't he feel better now that he's eaten? isn't mnh taking such good care of him?
and jsvng hates how much that works between his ribs, going down so much sweeter than the poor hare mnh is feeding him.

hi mousie!
yes you can ask, but it is hard to tell without knowing your @. I will block people who don't have their age in their bio if I see they have followed me multiple times and the softblocking isn't working. i might miss your age in your bio if it's in an obscure place fyi.

otherwise i block for a myriad of reasons, i'm a big believer in curating your online space and found it helped me a lot when i was struggling a lot last year. sometimes its not even that i want to remove someone from my online space forever, just at that time. i'm also not against reviewing those decisions. if you want to send me a another anon message with your @ i can have a look and maybe dm you. i won't post your question.

hi hi mousie!
you're welcome, thank you for giving me the push i needed to straighten it up. i'm glad you enjoyed the extra bit, i still have a little in the reserve from what i originally sent to cloud to maybe share at another time. the phrase 'little hole' makes me dizzy, fucking hell. it was good timing that the new ellipsus feature dropped at the same time!
i'm glad it worked well for you! i love the way ellipsus really commits to accessibility. i asked awhile ago if there was a way to change the default heading styles and they responded and said not rn, but there was a work around. i responded and said it would be nice if they could at least make an accessible version so users could switch between the two, i have dyslexia so certain fonts are very difficult for me. so i was elated when they had done exactly that with this new feature! i'm not saying it was based on my feedback, but i love that they do consider these things and are so firmly anti-gen ai.
i hope your tummy is always warm and happy, and you're eye aren't too strained 🤍
adhflksjd. the amount of props on that thread/drabble is crazy, people have definitely been liberal with it haha.

hi mousie!
thank you so much, that's so sweet! this makes me very happy and i appreciate the little boost this evening 🤍
i can't really say i know what i feels like to be shy, but i do empathise. but i promise i'd be more than happy to hear from you on the tl/regularly, and i hope you can find the courage to say hi. i do appreciate its tough, so i'm extra grateful you came here to say such nice things.
it's also very kind to say that i do good in the community but i really don't think i've done much for the community anytime recently, but i certainly will keep sharing my writing. thank you again for being so kind to come by and say this. i hope we can speak again 🤍

hi mousie!
thank you that's very kind, and congratulations! that's exciting! <3 i'm so happy you love it, what a great place to start writing from.

i can't stress enough how you should absolutely do it!! and even better, if you've done a storyboard you're already built the foundations of the fic, so you've already jumped the first hurdle. academic writing is different to fanfiction, but its still writing. those skills of how to construct something to communicate clear ideas, or persuade are transferable.

i think you've already done what my number one tip would be, which is to write something that interests you. following your own interest/passion will mean you actually enjoy the process, but it will also make the end result better.

i think its important to find the way of writing that works for you. this might be something you can draw from your previous experience writing academically, or you might need to experiment. you'll find lots of writing advice online, but not everything works for every person. some people need a very structured plan in order to write. but i can't write like that. too much structure makes it feel stressful to me. so whatever writing advice i give, or you see elsewhere, if it doesn't seem to work for your brain ignore it.

as for writing tips:
know your characters. yes its minsung, and yes you probably already have a good idea who they are. but think about the version of them from your storyboard and define them. i usually have at the top of my planning doc a quick list or bullet points as to who the main characters are/where they're at. for instance, jisung from incandescent was: "unpresented and anxious about it, feels like a alien, newly returned to town, a romantic (reads too much poetry ect), staying with the lees for the summer." you can see this was pretty brief, but it was enough to remind me who he was when i was struggling with writing. you can make this more in depth too, for ytem i made a whole table to track where they started and would end.

i find it useful to break the fic down into sections, especially when i'm writing something longer or more complicated. depending on the fic this could be really broad ('meeting', 'smut') or scene by scene ('dancing', 'walk home'). this helps me not to feel overwhelmed, i don't have to write the whole fic, just the section i'm on.

write without thinking of an audience. thinking too much about the audience will distract and discourage you imo. focus on whats in your head and getting in the doc. it doesn't matter if you think its bad, get it down in the doc! the editing process is for thinking about if your audience will understand what you've written, and even better if you can get a beta reader too.

if you get stuck on a word while writing don't let it ruin your flow. stick a place holder in, make it easy to find, and keep going. you can work out the right word/phrase later, you don't want to waste your time on it at that moment if it means losing your motivation to keep writing. when i say make the palce holder easy to find i highlight it so it stands out and encase it in square brackets. later i can ctrl+f '[' and make sure nothing slipped past my edit.

honestly placeholders are great for all sorts of stuff. if you find dialogue hard to write, put a place holder in and come back to it. or make a rough note about whats being said and figure out the specfics/dialogue tags later. sometimes i find this easier because when i've written other parts of the fic i have a better idea of what i want them to say, or how i want them to say it.

don't be afraid to edit and revise your ideas if they suddenly don't feel like they're working. 'kill your darlings' is a classic piece of advice, and its really true. sometimes we do need to cut bits we love because they're just not working. sometimes you can work them in elsewhere. it can hurt, but don't shoot yourself in the foot trying to hold onto something if it's making everything else so much harder.

if you plan on posting when you're done i think its handy to put a list of tags in your doc. i keep this up to date as i write, more or less, and it makes adding the tags when coming to post waaay easier. sometimes i forget all the little things in the fic that should maybe be tagged. its also handy if you do look for a betareader because they can let you know if they think something should be added, and you can give them an idea of the tags so they know if they'll be comfortable to betaread it.

lastly, enjoy the process! it is supposed to be fun, so don't put too much pressure on yourself. practice makes progress, you'll get there plugging a way at it even if its slowly.

please feel free to dm me if you want to talk more about your writing! i love to brainworm and talk about writing 🧡