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Nonnie · 29d
Hi! I can give you an example. In this dialogue
“There’s nothing to misunderstand. I like you and would like to take you out”
“It’s not that simple —”
“It is very simple”
“I’m trying to explain that—”
“It’s a yes or no question”
You can add period/full stop after each statement, before the quotation mark.
“There’s nothing to misunderstand. I like you and would like to take you out.”
“It’s not that simple —”
“It is very simple.”
“I’m trying to explain that—”
“It’s a yes or no question.”
It's just a small detail really, but I'm sure it helps to boost the readability.
Hope to see more works from you!! Have fun writing!
duly noted! I think it may have been my rush to get the story out that I didn't fully proof read. But thank you for pointing it to me. I will keep it in mind. And yes I'm excited to share more stories >3
Nonnie · 1mo
your fic is so sweet and i like seungkwan’s internal thoughts, but i think it’d be easier to read if you’d fix the punctuation especially when you’re writing the dialogue. <3
hi! thank you for reading and leaving feedback. I will look into the issues you have, but it would be beneficial for me if you gave me an example, for better understanding. :)