hiyaaaaa! thanks for the question! i think if i wrote it again i'd just make it longer LOL which honestly. insane to say because i already felt like it's quite lengthy as someone who doesn't Love to write more than 20k, but i do think it could've benefited from some filler and some pacing in the final three-ish chapters. i do feel like conflict was sowed throughout but i always wonder if i could've upped the ante more, so when that conflict was ultimately reaped it would have a bigger impact. but that said, i still loved writing it! it is definitely a reflection of how i was writing at the time and i feel like almost a year later my style has evolved somewhat, so it might have changed in that regard too.