Hi!
I'm currently re-reading if only the light could stay and was surprised that you actually rewrote them. I didn't think there was anything wrong with the previous one but now that I've read the new version, it felt more clear and more consistent. Hope that you won't abandon this one, and I'll be able to read this till the end. It's currently my favourite fic of yours.
Have a good day! Thanks for making my days happier reading your fics