little gremlins · 14d
I don’t know how you do it. You make these characters come ALIVE. little things like jk and yoongi slipping into Korean or the part where Namjoon gets kind of distant. Those seemingly small things in your story create such 3 dimensional characters. How do you even come up with stuff that paints such a realistic picture? Like if I go back and dissect your story there is not one line that is written without intention. I can’t find one thing that doesn’t actually need to be there. Like obviously you take
Oh 😭 THANK YOU 😭😭😭 god adding the Korean convo between them was a last minute add to the ch but it felt so write, so seeing this makes me extra happy I went and did that 🫶🏻 Making the characters’ interactions or little moments feel like it’s real people at the centre of them is all part of my evil plan atp! I try very hard to reaaally get to know my characters and to feel out what they might do or think bc I always want the reader to be able to feel like they could actually exist 🥹 also “I can’t find one thing that doesn’t actually need to be there” so ok that made me tear up!!!! Ilu!!!??
