oh god, i wish i had a clear answer, but it’s always just edit as i go. I try to write out a whole section before i go back and edit. but i really just edit as it comes to me because i reread what i write and then fix it up to be more readable or mesh into the overall story better. I have a final edit i do when it’s all written out where i’ll fix little things here and there while my beta (my mom <3) takes her time to look it through. Im an edit monster but at the same time im not striving for perfection, theres always gonna be sumn i can change cuz thats just me. As long as the story feels cohesive and coveys the emotion im just trying to convey than i am satisfied ^^